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Project
#10
Adolescent Girls
and Classroom Discourse
November
1995
By Heather A. Blair, Agnes Rolheiser, Susan Reschny
1.
Introduction
2.
Methodology
3.
Theoretical Framework
4.
Results of the Investigation
5.
Implications for Teaching and Learning
6.
Recommendations
References
1.
Introduction
The topic of
this study was the construction of gender and ethnicity in the face-to-face
communications of early adolescent girls. The study was carried
out through in-depth observations and analysis of the oral and written
discourse of girls in two grade eight classrooms.
There is a growing
concern in the educational community that schools are less than
successful places for girls and children of color. Fine and Zane
(1989, p.78) remind us of how insidious it is that "public
schools are marbled by social class, race and ethnicity and gender,
yet they are laminated in denial, represented as if race, class
and gender neutral." For example, adolescent girls can be considered
less successful academically than adolescent Euro-Canadian boys
because more boys than girls excel in high school mathematics and
science and go into the scientific fields of study. At the University
of Saskatchewan, women comprised the majority of the Arts and Science
student population, but only 30% of the Bachelor of Sciences degrees
were awarded to women in 1992 (University of Saskatchewan, 1993).
As educators,
teacher educators, and researchers, the authors wondered why this
kind of discrepancy continues to exist and what are some possible
sources of the problem. We wondered what happened to the girls we
worked with during their middle years. Believing that early adolescence
is an important time for girls in terms of their academic and social
development, we thought it could be helpful to look more specifically
at their experiences during this period.
According to
the American Association of University Women (1992), adolescence
is a time when girls begin to change their view of themselves as
learners and come to doubt their own potential. The association's
report, How Schools Shortchange Girls, suggests that girls
do not see themselves in the same academic light as boys, nor do
they succeed academically in the same ways, starting about the time
of pre-adolescence. The writers reported "that on average,
69 percent of elementary school boys and 60 percent of elementary
school girls reported that they are 'happy the way I am'; among
high school students, the percentages were 46 percent for boys,
and only 29 percent for girls" (p.12). From this evidence,
it is clear that attitudes change during the middle years.
There is a growing
body of research on gender issues in classrooms. Sadker and Sadker
(1994) pointed out the many implications of gender bias in the classrooms.
They suggest that these biases contribute to the loss of self-esteem
and academic security for girls.
- Sitting in
the same classrooms, reading the same textbook, listening to the
same teacher, boys and girls receive very different educations.
From grade school through graduate school female students are
more likely to be invisible members of classrooms. Teachers interact
with males more frequently, ask them better questions, and give
them more precise and helpful feedback. Over the course of the
years the uneven distribution of teacher time, energy, attention,
and talent, with boys getting the lion's share, takes its toll
on girls. Since gender bias is not a noisy problem, most people
are unaware of the secret sexist lessons and the quiet losses
they engender. (p. 1).
There seems
to be little question that adolescence is a time of change, and
as part of that change, youths constitute and reconstitute whom
they see themselves to be in relationship to those around them.
Adolescence is also a time when the lives of boys and girls become
more differentiated by gender. Both in school and outside of school,
adolescents are segregated by gender a great deal of the time. Boys
and girls take on the new adolescent behaviors that are specific
to their gender. From the way they hold their school books to their
demeanor and talk, they are specializing their behaviors according
to gender.
These are things
that we have not paid a great deal of attention to in classroom
in the past. Is there something in this early adolescent experience
that makes the course of their gender-differentiation both unique
and problematic for girls? Based on this assumption and concern,
we designed the study to look at the school experience of grade
eight girls in terms of their gender and discourse. It attempts
to address the general question: What are the implications for the
classroom in the ways that adolescent girls represent themselves
as gendered through their oral and written discourse?
Research
Questions
We focus on
how gender is constructed in the face-to-face communications of
middle years girls in multicultural urban classrooms by addressing
the following questions:
- How do early
adolescent girls in a multicultural, urban Saskatchewan school
construct their gender identity in their talk?
- How do early
adolescent girls in a multicultural, urban Saskatchewan school
construct their gender identity in their writing?
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2.
Methodology
This research
included ethnographic and socio-linguistic approaches to the examination
of classroom interaction and language. The findings are presented
here as a micro-ethnographic case study. During the 1994-95 school
year, we observed the students in the classrooms, recorded the girls'
interactions, tape-recorded their talk, read their written texts
and interviewed them about their writing. We also tape-recorded
their speech in small group discussions. The classroom teachers
were interviewed on a regular basis to gather their observations,
as were other teachers and school personnel who had direct contact
with the girls. The following sections describe these data sources
in more detail.
Participant
Observation
Field notes
from observations of these classrooms provided an overview of the
classroom community, student-student interactions, student-teacher
interactions, language use, and social relations. These participant
observer field notes were typed, studied for emerging themes, coded,
sorted, and re-sorted according to emerging patterns.
The observations
provided the groundwork for understanding the social context of
learning among the students in these classes, and among the girls
in particular. They also provided the basis for identifying the
range of classroom writing opportunities and for describing the
contexts in which oral discourse took place.
Outside the
classrooms, we observed and recorded school-wide events, staff meetings,
middle years teachers' committee meetings, and student council meetings,
and we participated in an extra curricular event called "TANSI",
the meetings of the Aboriginal youth group. We believed that these
events outside the classroom helped us to develop a deeper understanding
of the middle years experience for girls at this school. The field
notes from each event were coded to identify various references
to adolescent girls.
Oral
Discourse
in order to
understand the role that oral discourse played for girls in this
class, we looked at their talk in the classroom during both "informal
activities" and "formal task activities" (James and
Drakich 1993, p. 287). We looked primarily at their talk in small
groups. In these classrooms, the students often worked on group
projects in small groups either in their classroom, in an adjacent
room, or in the hallway. The group discussions were student-led,
and the students wither worked through a task that they had been
given or, alternatively, they worked on one that they had designed
for themselves. These groups were primarily self-selected and were
a regular part of the classroom activities. Some of the group activities
were literature-related and others were a part of their social studies
course. The small groups provided the researchers with the opportunity
to record the girls' talk in a context common to many classrooms.
Written
Discourse
We observed
the girls as they did creative and free writing, recorded their
writing behavior, and described the context and social conditions
that were in play when they wrote. Analysis of the girls' writing
focused on what they did when they wrote, what they wrote about,
how they used writing to communicate, how they viewed their own
writing, how they interpreted their audience, and how they included
themselves in what they wrote.
The girls' writing
was read by both the observer and the classroom teachers and was
discussed by them with the girls. These discussions took place in
the form of interviews, which looked at both the processes and the
products of the girls' writing experiences in these classrooms.
The girls were asked to talk about their writing and who they were
as writers, as well as the role that written discourse played in
their lives. They were encouraged to discuss their growth as writers
and how they saw themselves emerging in their own written text.
All the girls received a preliminary interview that provided a time
to get to know them and to find out the following: the kinds of
writing that they did, their reasons for writing, the functions
that writing served for them, where they got ideas for their writing
and what they liked or disliked about classroom writing. Six girls,
who we felt best represented a cross section of the class, both
academically and socially, were selected for further in-depth interviews.
The next interview focused on texts that these six girls had selected
from their writing file as best representing them as writers. The
same girls were interviewed a third time in order to discuss more
explicitly issues related to gender for grade eight students at
this school.
Interviews
with Teachers and School Personnel
The classroom
teachers were secondary observers in this research and were interviewed
regarding the girls' oral and written discourse throughout the year.
Informal interviews with the teachers also provided insight into
the classrooms as learning communities and the girls' roles in these
communities.
Various other
school personnel were also interviewed in order to get a fuller
understanding of the context of this school and community. Among
those interviewed were the school social worker, aboriginal liaison
worker, special needs teacher, and principal. The focus of the questions
for the social worker, the aboriginal liaison worker and the principal
were the broader context of the school, the student population and
the community. These people were also asked to discuss what they
saw as issues for girls in this school and what they thought it
meant to be a girl in eighth grade. The special needs teacher talked
more specifically about the oracy and literacy of the girls she
worked with in the classrooms.
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3.
Theoretical Framework
Gender:
A Social Construct
9:30:The
class is filtering into the gym for Phys. Ed. Six non-Aboriginal
girls go to one end of the gym and start to warm up. Mich and
Danny are putting the volleyball net up. The boys come in from
the locker room.
9:35:Four
Aboriginal girls walk in, in a group. Three go to the far end
of the gym and Brenda sits on the bench. Connie, the self-designated
scorekeeper, invites Brenda to help her keep score (there seems
to be no question that these two girls will not play).
9:40:The
girls are in teams of three on one side of the net and the boys
are in teams on the other. Several girls keep their jackets on.
The rallying begins with teams of three on three. Rosanne goes
to the side to take her jacket off, and two more Aboriginal girls
withdraw from the game to the sidelines.
9:50:For
the first time in the game, the threesome of girls wins the set
and gets to cross to the other end of the court. One of the girls
says in a disparaging voice, "At least we got there."
This scene from
a typical physical education class emerged and kept re-emerging
amongst many images from the 1994-95 school year. The girls participated
in physical education activities less and less as the class continued,
and Trina's timid comment, "at least we got there", typified
a kind of "settling for less" mentality among the girls.
We asked ourselves "what did this event and others like it
mean to the girls in our study? What did it tell us about gender
relations in this school? Does it tell us anything about gender
relations in Canadian society?" We wondered if there were messages
here about gender and learning and what inclusion and exclusion
meant for these girls.
Our study of
gender and discourse has been shaped by several theoretical perspectives.
In an ethnographic tradition we have sought to understand and present
a socio-cultural phenomena from the perspective of the participants,
and in doing so, we have immersed ourselves as best we could in
the world of the "insider" (Malinowski, 1948). The cultural
world examined in this is the experience of girls in their senior
year of elementary school, seen in relationship to both the micro
and macro levels of social behavior and social order. Meredith Cherland
(1994), a classroom ethnographer, describes this relationship, "When
I enter elementary school classrooms, I listen to a conversation,
see the larger social order at work in shaping it, and, at the same
time try to see how that conversation is in fact creating the social
order before my very eyes" (p. 3).
In our view,
which is based on anthropological and sociological perspectives,
the phenomenon, "gender" is socially constructed (Garfinkle,
1967; Goffman, 1976, 1977). We do not support a biological framework
for gender, but rather suggest that humans construct their gender
identities, beginning at a very young age, and continue to construct
or reconstruct them through their interactions with others. Garfinkle's
(1967) classic research with a youth who had just undergone a sex
change and was reconstructing herself as a woman laid the foundation
for this social theory of gender. Garfinkle demonstrated the process
of a person constructing her gender identity and the subtleties
of identity construction in relationship to those around her.
Gender is both
individual and personal. It is part of the social relations of human
interaction, and it is symbolic (Thorne, 1994; Harding, 1986; and
Scott, 1988). It is also a flexible and fluid phenomenon that differs
in its relevance and value according to context.
Social psychologists
describe early adolescence as a crucial time for girls as they socially
construct their identities. Gilligan (1993) suggests that adolescent
girls watch, listen, and change according to the people around them.
She says that "on a daily basis, girls receive lessons on what
they can let out and what they must keep in, if they do not want
to be spoken about by others as mad or bad, or simply told that
they are wrong" (p. 149).
The reality
of girls' gender construction during adolescence is important, yet
little understood. We believe that if teachers understand how girls
learn the subtleties of gender and can see how they are representing
themselves through their discourse, they will know how to support
girls better.
Talk: A Social
Construct
On the basis
of an ethnography of communication frameworks, Hymes (1974) suggested
that humans in any speech community represent themselves through
their use of speech and construct who they are through interactions
with others. The speech of an individual tells a great deal about
who she is, as well as her relationships to others.
Philips, Steele,
and Tanz (1987), Hill (1987), Tannen (1986, 1990, 1991, 1993), Lakoff
(1975, 1983), and Ochs (1987), to name a few, have specified how
the speech of women differs from that of men. Their work has provided
insight into the way that women use language and create themselves
as gendered through language use. Tannen (1986, 1990, 1991, 1993)
has also contributed to a profile of cross-gender communication,
delineating and describing the linguistic features of talk between
men and women, as well as the effects of this talk on the dynamics
of power. Coates (1986) suggests that different patterns of oral
discourse affect relationships within school, as in society, and
that the characteristic pattern of discourse in a classroom environment
can create or support literacy and learning differentially for girls
and boys.
Considerations
of differential learning and power were key to our research as we
looked for information to help us better understand what was going
on with adolescent girls. We believed that it would be helpful to
examine how young adolescent girls were learning the discourse patterns
of their world and how they were creating who they are through their
oral discourse.
Text: A Social
Construct
Recognizing
that classroom writing does not take place in a vacuum, our study
looked at writing as a social activity. Cooper and Holzman (1989)
suggest that:
- ...writing
is a real interaction among social groups and individuals...readers
are always present to writers--real people we know and talk with
and do other things with...writing is a way of interacting with
others--a social activity. (p. x).
Written discourse
is also embedded in the world of the writer. The realities of the
writer's life affect and shape the discourse. In a writing study
with Native American children in Arizona, Bird (1992) discussed
the embeddedness of literacy of Tohono O'odham children. When she
compared the children's writing to the personal and social realities
in their lives, it was obvious that the children's life experiences
affected what they chose to write about. Bird stated that "the
evolution of their texts cannot be seen apart from the complexity
of who they are as writers working within the context of their multiple
communities" (p. 68). She found five features of the children's
lives represented in their writing:
- a personal
individual reality; the dual realities of the Tohono O'odham and
American mainstream cultures; the reality of a fantasy world influenced
by male-female perspectives; and te pragmatic reality of the instructional
school setting in which the children wrote (p.66).
Calkins (1994)
advises us of the importance of social factors during adolescence,
saying that during this important time, adolescents "construct
a sense of personal identity. It is a time for trying on selves,
for reflection, self-awareness, and self-definition" (p.158).
She also suggests that it is a time when adolescents begin to embrace
the notion of resistance and this experience can be conflicting
form any of them. All these issues are important for youth at this
age, and they "need to write about the poignant, turbulent
events of their lives" (p.174).
A person's writing
is connected to the multiple experiences of life and to the multiple
sign and communication systems that shape it. Cooper (1989) proposes
"an ecological model of writing, [in which a] fundamental tenet
is that writing is an activity through which a person is continually
engaged with a variety of socially constituted systems" (p.6).
He suggests that writers are not inventing ideas; they are transposing
ideas from their "interactive landscape" (p.12).
Writing is also
a gendered activity. Bird (1992) indicated that she found gender
differences between what boys and girls chose to write about. The
girls wrote more about home and family, while the boys wrote more
"true fantasies". The boys also were more likely to resort
to violence to resolve conflict than were the girls (p.78).
We believed
that the girls in our middle years classrooms were continually negotiating
the relationships and experiences of adolescence. Their lives were
multiply connected to the realities of a multicultural urban life
and factors that affected them as girls. We wondered if and how
these connections affected their literacy, particularly how their
written discourse reflected multiple social realities. We hoped
that our research would provide a view of written discourse from
the perspective of these young women and shed some light on the
implications of gender in schools.
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4.
Results of the Investigation
Context/Setting
of the Study
This research
was done in two grade eight classrooms in St. M school in Saskatoon,
Saskatchewan, Canada, during the 1994-95 school year. St. M school
is situated in a lower income, west-side neighborhood called Harbourview.
In the community served by the school there are many issues of gender.
For example, teen pregnancies, single parenting and abuse of various
kinds are not uncommon. Historicially, girls from this neighborhood
have been relatively successful in terms of passing through the
grades in elementary school and high school, but they have not generally
continued on to post-secondary education. A good number have, in
fact, dropped out of high school and started families at an early
age, with many of these living below the poverty line. Others have
ended up in low paying traditional jobs or stayed at home as homemakers
and caregivers.
Gender divides
the population of Harbourview and Saskatoon in a number of ways.
Family life, public life, and the work place are obviously gendered.
Women continue to work in the service industries and professions
like teaching and nursing, where men work at a wide range of professional
and blue collar jobs. Men still earn more than women in Harbourview,
as they do throughout the city and the country (nationally, women
earn only 63% of what men earn, according to the Saskatoon Star
Phoenix, 1995).
Children in
Harbourview experience segregation by gender. In the community and
school, they are segregated for sports and special interest clubs
like girl guides and boy scouts. Thorne (1993) suggests that North
American children learn at an early age that "girls and boys
are on different sides" (p.63).
In 1994, women
comprised 51.4% of the population of Saskatoon, but the ratio of
females to males varied in different age groups. For example, there
were more boys than girls under that age of ten years, but the numbers
equalized for those in the pre-teen and teen years. The 20-49 year
old group had slightly more women than men, and in the 50 years
plus categories, there were markedly more women than men.
The city of
Saskatoon has another division which is both geographical and social.
There is an "east side" and a "west side" to
the city which are clearly marked by the river. This construct,
"east side" vs. "west side", has existed since
the "east side" was settled as a temperance colony, and
the non-temperate "west side" developed across the river
from it. To this day, the "east side" is though of as
the more prestigious place to live, with the University and many
of the city's wealthy homes located there. The "west side"
is thought of as more culturally diverse and less affluent.
The "west
side" has been the home to immigrants over many years. The
Chinese community, for example, has a very visible presence there,
with Chinese restaurants, grocery stores, and a home for the elderly.
The Cantonese language is spoken in these places, while Chinese
newspapers and notices indicate that Cantonese is a significant
written discourse as well.
Ukrainian immigrants
to Saskatoon also originally settled on the "west side."
Even though they now live throughout the city, they still have a
presence here. It is not uncommon to hear the Ukrainian language
spoken in the stores and community centers, but evidence of it as
an authentic means of written discourse is uncommon. Several older
suburbs in this area are home to many elderly Ukrainian people,
and there are a Ukrainian restaurant, two butcher shops, several
bakeries and a handicraft store.
The "west
side" is also home to many Aboriginal people. A number of community
services serve primarily an Aboriginal clientele. For example, the
Indian and Metis Friendship Center, and Indian-run organization,
provides community, social, recreational and cultural services.
The Aboriginal people on the "west side" tend to be poorer
than their European or Asian counterparts and to have lower levels
of education and higher rates of unemployment. They often face problems
related to housing, racism, lack of employment, and health. Aboriginal
languages are spoken in their homes and in such public places as
the hospital or drug store. However, there is no print in any Aboriginal
language found in public places.
The community
of Harbourview itself has further demarcations of economy, culture,
and gender. Harbourview Road, for example, divides the community
into two parts. On one side of the road, there are mostly apartments,
and on the other side, there are houses.
The apartment
buildings are home to many Aboriginal people, as well as unemployed
and working class non-Aboriginals. Some residents in these apartments
are students at the community college or the University. Others
are single mothers working in their homes while raising their children,
or going out to work part-time.
The residents
in the houses are also predominantly working class families, although
slightly better off financially than the apartment dwellers. There
are more households with two adults, more two income families and
fewer Aboriginal homes. There is less mobility among the families
in the houses compared to the families in the apartments, even though
some of the houses are rented.
According to
the 1991 census, 57.7% of the families in Harbourview were two-parent
families, 17.4% were one-parent families, and 24% were single individuals.
The average annual family income was $36,886 in 1991 (Statistics
Canada), yet 28.3% of the families earned $19,999 or less and 11%
earned less than $10,000.
In 1993 the
population of this community was 4,740, of which 973 were children
of elementary school age. There were few elderly people in the area.
In fact, less than 10% of the population was over the age of fifty.
There were also few well established, long-term home owners, with
a correspondingly great number of temporary residents. Many school
classrooms have a turnover of 50% of their students in one school
year.
Harbourview
is shaped roughly like a triangle. One side is bordered by the railway
tracks, grain elevators, and stock yards; another side is bordered
by a main thoroughfare and shopping mall; and the third side is
bordered by Briarpoint, another lower middle income neighborhood.
There are a few community services and commercial properties in
Harbourview and in the adjacent neighborhood, Briarpoint. Children
come to St. M school from both of these neighbourhoods.
St. M school
is part of the Saskatoon Catholic School Division and is one of
twenty-five elementary schools in this division. Parents choose
to send their children to these publicly funded Catholic Schools.
During the 1994-95 school year, St. M School had about 500 children
in grades K to 8. Approximately half were girls; at least one third
were of Aboriginal ancestry. There were also a few Asian, Filipino,
East Indian, South American and African children. There were 20
teachers, eight teacher assistants, a principal, a secretary, a
part-time social worker/counselor, a part-time librarian, and a
part-time Aboriginal liaison worker.
There were two
classes of grade 8 students at St. M school during the 1994-95 school
year. Room A was a grade 7/8 combination and Room B was a grade
eight class. The student population in each room fluctuated between
25 to 30 youths throughout the year.
In room A, there
were slightly less than equal numbers of boys and girls, and at
least one third of the students were of Aboriginal ancestry. There
was also one boy from Pakistan. At the beginning of the school year,
ten of the students were in grade seven and 15 were in grade eight.
The homeroom teacher for the fall term was an experienced whole
language teacher, who taught Language Arts, Religion, Physical Education
and Social Studies. She also had the responsibilities of Vice-Principal
of the school. The other teacher was itinerant, spending only part
of her teaching time at this school. She taught Mathematics, French,
Science and Art in Room A. At the beginning of 1995, the Vice-Principal/teacher
was transferred to another school and a new teacher/Vice-Principal
came into this room. She, too, was an experienced teacher and taught
the same subjects as her predecessor.
At the beginning
of the school year, there were 17 girls and 12 boys in Room B, half
of whom were Aboriginal youths. Four adolescents were new to Canada,
having arrived within the past five years, one girl from Central
America, two boys from South America, and a very recent arrival
from Iran. For the first two months of the school year, Room B had
a young male teacher who was replacing a teacher on maternity leave.
He was a first-year teacher who established a very positive working
relationship with the students during these two months. When the
regular teacher returned at the beginning of November, she resumed
teaching all subjects with the exception of French. She was very
energetic, holistic and creative in her approach to teaching and
had taught middle years for ten years.
The grade eight
girls in Room A and Room B were the focus of the research. However,
as there were quite a number of girls who arrived and left during
the course of the school year, the numbers were always changing.
Room A, for example, had eight girls in total, but only five who
started and finished the year there. There were also five girls
in the room in grade seven, but even though there were almost as
many girls as boys in total in this classroom, the girls seemed
to be in the minority in terms of their presence. In contrast, in
Room B, the girls were slightly in the majority and had a much stronger
presence. They asserted themselves in the class and interacted quite
a lot with some of the boys.
In both rooms
there were very obvious friendship groups. In Room A, the Aboriginal
and non Aboriginal girls seldom interacted with each other, whereas
in Room B, there were groups that included both non-Aboriginal and
Aboriginal girls. There were, however, two Aboriginal girls in Room
B who were not part of the other girls' social interactions on any
regular basis throughout the year. As Thorne (1994) also found,
we concluded that gender and separation by gender played an important
role in these classrooms; however, there were occasions and contexts
where gender was not the deciding factor. There were times, for
example, when ethnicity or age played a larger role, and this was
often the case with the Aboriginal and non-Aboriginal girls in Rooms
A and B.
Gender and ethnicity
were not talked about in these classrooms. Nor were there discussions
about culture, race, class, or identity. To our knowledge, none
of the girls spoke another language in these classrooms.
General
Classroom Discourse
Both classrooms
were places where students were encouraged to share their ideas,
compare what they were learning, ask questions and take ownership
for their own learning. Both were places where the teachers tried
to make everyone feel comfortable and create an open and inviting
atmosphere. Every morning in Room A, for example, the students and
teacher opened their day with the Lord's Prayer and 10 minutes of
sharing time. The students talked about their families, themselves,
and their accomplishments. The teacher listened attentively and
encouraged everyone to share. The girls, however, seemed much more
reticent than the boys to talk in this forum, and the boys dominated
the talk.
Debra Tannen's
(1990) analysis was helpful in understanding why this might be so.
She suggested that men talk more than women in 'public' contexts
and women tend to talk more in 'private' contexts. James and Drakich
(1993), in their review of research on this topic, compare the differences
in research findings and summarize Tannen's work as follows:
- in a public
situation, she suggests, there are typically more participants
than in a private situation, they know each other less well, and
there are more status differences among them, therefore participants
are more likely to feel that they will be appraised by others.
Men will thus talk more because they feel the need to establish
or maintain their status in the group, whereas women will talk
less because they do not use talk to assert status and because
they fear that their talk will be judged negatively (p. 285).
Tannen (1990)
suggests that the situation is different for women in private contexts.
Here women are more likely to be close to or at least know the individuals,
and as women see talk as important for the maintenance of relationships,
they talk more in these private contexts.
There were plenty
of opportunities throughout the school day for talk in both classrooms,
and the students discoursed on a variety of subjects. Some of their
talk was very private, in which case they whispered, and some was
made very public through the use of loud, directed comments. There
was a great deal of mobility on the part of the students in these
classrooms which facilitated talk in pairs and small groups. The
girls made and took advantages of opportunities to talk to each
other throughout the day. They were busier at this than were the
boys.
All of the talk
in both classrooms was in English, even though there were youths
who spoke Spanish, Cree, Saulteaux, Portuguese, Urdu, and Arabic.
These languages were not used even for the whispered, private talk.
There were several girls who indicated in the TANSI (Aboriginal
culture) group meeting that they spoke an Aboriginal language, but
they also said that they didn't use it in the classroom or at school.
This decision to speak in English was evident as well at the TANSI
potluck and social held one evening at the school. When the drummer
gave a prayer in Cree, everyone listened attentively; however, none
of the girls used the Cree language publicly throughout the evening.
Talking seemed
to have varied purposes. Sometimes it had a social function for
both the boys and girls, such as getting others to laugh; sometimes
it served to get attention of others; and at times it was used to
control others and gain power. There were numerous instances where
"talk" resulted in intimidation and silence on the part
of classmates. Talk and the absence of talk were powerful phenomena
in these classrooms.
There were times
where the absence of talk was obvious and followed various unwritten
rules and codes of silence. For example, squealing on others was
sometimes a definite "no". However, the decision to talk
or not depended on who the person being squealed on was and her
relationship to her classmates. If she was well liked, no one talked;
if she was of lower status in the classroom, someone might tell
the teacher. In one class when the teacher made inquiries as to
classroom property that had disappeared, no one seemed to know anything
or would offer any leads. It was as though the class members had
all agreed not to talk.
Keeping information
in confidence, or "not telling anyone", was also very
important. In one instance where two girls realized that their friend
was seriously depressed and threatening suicide, they hesitated
to talk to the teacher, worrying about whether or not they should
break the "don't tell anyone" pact.
Talk took on
many forms and functions, and its range of content was wide and
varied. Some topics appeared frequently in general classroom talk
and other topics never arose. There were topics that were more likely
to be a part of the "girl talk" and some that were "boy
talk". Topics common to both gender groups were school events,
parties, weekend activities and the other sex.
Boy
Talk
The boys' public
discourse took up a great deal of space in both classrooms. Boys
often spoke to each other in loud voices from their own desks, which
could be as far as three or four rows apart. Accompanying their
words with gestures, eye contact, and laughter, a number of boys
in both rooms were very conspicuous, and if they were absent, there
was a noticeable difference in the class's talk. Even those students
who were less verbal participated in the public 'boy talk' by listening,
watching and laughing.
In these classrooms,
less public 'boy talk' tended to feature such topics as bikes, cars,
money, gadgets, and sports at the professional, local, and school
levels, as well as more general talk about what the boys were going
to do and when. There were a couple of small groups of boys who
hung out together and talked privately, without participating verbally
in the larger public "boy talk" of the class.
In one of the
classrooms, the boys' discourse seemed to be part of a process of
one-upmanship. It was a kind of game to see who could "out
talk" or "out lip" the others. There was, among some
of these boys, a constant search for the next laugh from the largest
crowd. Often this discourse had someone from the class as the scapegoat.
Discrediting and belittling the girls was a common occurrence, most
often done in such a way that the teachers would not hear.
One such instance
occurred when a group of boys and girls were organizing their presentation
about the book, Island of the Blue Dolphins. One small boy
said to his group, "It's about some old Indian bag holding
a stick." His group included an Aboriginal boy, an Aboriginal
girl, and five others. The Aboriginal girl, who was very popular
among both boys and girls made a comment back to him. He quickly
backtracked and said directly to her, "Oh, you won't look like
that!" There were no further responses.
Another such
incident involved the use of the term, "Nanabush", to
refer to the Aboriginal girls. One of the boys said to two Aboriginal
girls across the aisle from him, "Shut up, Nanabush."
Then more quietly, he said "Nanabush, you get..........,"
when one of the girls responded, "You don't have a bush,"
he countered with, "Who knows a bush!" in a suggestive
tone and manner. The girls averted their eyes and said nothing further.
A few minutes later the same boy pointed to another Aboriginal girl
in the class and said, "There's nose a bush." In a short
while, he turned back to the first two girls, who were talking and
said, "Don't say anything about me, Ros a bush." He repeated
these terms several times over the morning and the girls kept silent.
The boys' public
discourse included a great number of references to sex and sexuality,
including many homophobic references. Phrases like "this is
so gay" and "faggot" were common. This sort of talk
was usually delivered to an audience and seldom received a response.
The ultimate put down was a sexual one.
There were other
more explicit sexual references that were directed at almost all
the girls. In both classes, one or two of the girls appeared to
be targeted by the boys for these comments, and one or two were
spared. References to the sexual act and comments on the girls'
body parts were common, as were terms like "slut", "bitch",
"tightass", and "pussy". Verbal abuse became
an issue in one classroom when the students were immersed in a Social
Studies unit on "personal and social issues for adolescents".
When the girls started to talk out about the way the boys treated
them, the things they said, and how they felt about it, a great
deal was revealed. The boys denied that their language was hurtful
and said that they didn't think the girls would take these comments
seriously. The boys saw it as joking and teasing.
The dynamics
of the "boy talk" in both classrooms was both complex
and changing. Although not the focus of this study, an understanding
of the existence of "boy talk" helps us better understand
the girls' experiences in these grade eight classrooms.
Girl
Talk
Among the frequent
topics for "girl talk" were boys, romance, clothes, fatness,
the events of last night or the weekend, who was doing what, and
who said what to whom. Discussions of relationships, both positive
and negative, were also prominent. The girls' public discourse frequently
included talk about family, and it was not uncommon to hear the
girls telling about something that went on with their siblings or
parents. Shannon's teen sister's baby, for example, was a common
topic of discussion.
Although there
were few references to sex in their public classroom talk, the girls
did privately respond to the boys' verbal harassment with terms
like "fag" and "gay". These terms were used
primarily in retort to the boys, and the retorts, too, were done
so that teachers wouldn't hear. The girls didn't use this terminology
in reference to other girls, acknowledging that they used it with
the boys as a means of self-defense.
The social networks
for talk were very important for the girls. One level of discourse
included girls from both classrooms as they socialized at recess
and lunch and lingered in the hallways and each others' classrooms
after the bell rang.
There was less
public discourse among the girls in Room A, where the girls' talk
was extemely low key. The girls in Room B, however, kept their discourse
more obviously public. They commented back and forth and often included
the boys in their banter.
In both classrooms,
however, the girls' private talk was very intense. The girls moved
around the classroom a great deal and were continually jockeying
for available desks in order to talk to one of their girl friends.
Their behavior supports the view of Tannen (1990) that women talk
more in private contexts than public contexts because women are
socialized, more than men, to believe that talk is important to
the "maintenance of harmonious relationships" (James and
Drakich, 1993, p.306).
When the girls
worked in groups, it was not uncommon for two or more floors of
conversation to be going on at one time. For example, one or two
girls would be involved in leading the formal task and asking questions
like, "who would like to......?" Meanwhile others would
be discussing a separate topic, "when are you going to fix
your....?" "Right after school!" "Good, it's
annoying me." Alternatively, the brief interjection of a new
topic might occur with a return to the formal task activities. Three
girls in a group preparing for a presentation on their study of
Island of the Blue Dolphins demonstrated this layered conversation:
D: Okay, we
could write - yeah, have some of those up. "Korunna's leg
was hurt very badly. She - chewed on......"
S: Cactus juice!
T: Cactus juice.
S: Yeah, just - make her drink cactus.
T: Very interesting.
S: So, "Mmm, good. Cactus juice!"
T: Found in your grocer's freezer! No - kidding!
D: Okay, so......Korunna is - Korunna lying down in cave.......
T: What, I'm not doing anything...yeah, it's good.
D: You're not doing anything.
T: I know.
S: You have neat writing, I have really messy writing - you won't
be able to see.
D: Okay, so that was - should happen - in the first. Okay. Korunna
was lying down in the cave.....
There were both
public and private spheres for discourse, with different kinds of
opportunities leading to different kinds of talk. One kind of public
discourse was the theatrical or stage talk with which the girls
experimented when they did stage or video presentations. For example,
when they were given a choice of ways to respond to a novel they
had just read, several groups of girls chose to make video presentations
on their novel for the class. During the filming of these videos,
their talk changed. Some tried out TV language, and several girls
took on the role of a talk show character, using phrases like, "Don't.........girlfriend",
and, "Now you listen to me girl, I had enough of you!"
in an accent imitating the one used in the American South. These
presentations were videotaped and shown to the rest of the class.
As the process of making the videotape removed the actors one step
from the audience, it seemed to give them the freedom to explore
new varieties of language. They did not use this kind of language
with a live audience. It was as though the video camera became an
intermediary.
The girls used
terms in their everyday speech that seemed to serve the function
of representing themselves as teens. Terms such as "whatever",
"cool", and "like" were extremely frequent,
as in most current teen language. Some girls used terms like "chick"
and "stoner" to refer to one another, but they were used
as a kind of compliment or statement of inclusion, not in a derogatory
manner. The girls also used the term "bitch" for girls
they were not getting along with, and this term functioned to exclude
others.
The "girl
talk" described here gives a glimpse of the implicit socio-linguistic
rules at play in these classroom. The girls used their talk to identify
themselves with those they saw as their friends and to separate
themselves from others. They used it to construct the image of who
they saw themselves to be. Both public and private oral discourse
played a very important role in the definition of gender for these
girls.
Written Discourse
In both classrooms
there were plenty of opportunities to write, as both teachers emphasized
writing and the process of writing. The students wrote reports,
essays, and study notes, and they had opportunities for creative
and free writing. They wrote on a regular basis, although not daily,
keeping their finished pieces, as well as works in progress, in
a writing file at their teachers' desks.
Non-Curricular
Writing
A great deal
of writing took place in both classrooms that was not curricular.
The girls wrote on their desks, binders, jeans, jackets, running
shoes, and skin. Given the opportunity to cover their desks with
colored paper, the girls wrote all over each others' desk tops.
They wrote compliments and greetings like "Amber wuz here",
"You're a cool chick", or "Right on, chick".
On several occasions the girls wrote messages n each others' arms
and hands. One day Sheena had writing covering her entire hand and
arm from the tips of her fingers to her elbow.
Another very
common aspect of their classroom writing was "notes".
When the girls were asked, all of them admitted to passing notes
in class, although several said they "don't do it so much this
year." The boys sometimes tried to intercept the notes but
did not write them.
One day when
the teacher intercepted a note, the boys asked to be allowed to
read it. The girl who had written and passed it actually begged
the teacher not to read the note out loud. She admitted that it
was a list of "who loves who" and stated adamantly that
it was "not true".
Note-writing,
according to the girls, functions as a replacement for talk, but
is generally not as personal as talk. According to Taylor (1993),
such substitutional writing serves an important function when a
person isn't physically near enough for direct oral communication.
Notes often included comments like, "how are you, what are
you doing after school, meet me at that place," or as Jerline
pointed out, notes could include "rumors that go around, or
if you want to do stuff after school." The girls wrote about
the class, for example, whether it was interesting or boring, and
they told each other about recent events. Sometimes notes served
just to pass the time, or as Sheena suggested, "[S]ometimes
you get really bored and there is nothing else to do so you just
write a note to somebody."
There were implicit
rules about the passing of these notes and "people [i.e., the
girls] just 'know' who to pass to who." The rules were, according
to the girls, established early in the school year and generally
followed.
As a genre of
out-of-school writing, the diary was very popular. All the girls
had written in a diary at some point; many still did, and some had
very recently stopped. Yet we only found a couple of examples often
girls using a diary format in their creative or free writing. Caywood
and Overing (1987) express some concern about this and suggest that
what is expected as classroom writing is not the kinds of written
discourse that women have excelled at in the past. The spheres of
discourse given a place of privilege in classrooms are those traditionally
used by men.
- Feminist
critics question the exclusion of alternate forms of discourse
such as private poetry, letters, diaries, journals, personal narratives,
oral or written, and autobiographies. These forms have been ignored
because they are frequently the only forms of discourse available
to women. (p. xii-xiii).
The Writing
Process
For the most
part the girls in these classrooms liked to write. They certainly
had their preferences about what they liked to write, and what conditions
were best for writing, but not one said she didn't like to write.
Most of the girls preferred to have choice in deciding what to write
and what form the writing should take; however, a few thought it
was just easier to be told what to do.
Atmosphere and
concentration were two elements of writing that mattered to the
girls. It was important to allow sufficient time for the writers
to settle down, collect their thoughts and get started. We found
that some of what looked on the surface like idle staring was part
of the girls' prewriting time. They took time to organize themselves
and their thoughts. We found that it helped the girls to talk about
options for prewriting and what writers do as they get ready to
write.
Similarly, we
found that it was important to both allow and support students in
their efforts to interact with others and their environment when
they wrote. Some found that there were times when they could not
concentrate in the classroom because there were just too many distractions.
When this happened, they preferred to write outside the classroom
or at home. Cindi described how she created an atmosphere to write
at home by making a cup of tea, sitting at the table, taking time
to relax, and just thinking for a while. Atwell (1987) in her seminal
book on adolescents, In the Middle, discussed the need for
both quiet and interaction as a problem in classrooms:
- Figuring
out how to accommodate both writers' needs for quiet and their
need to talk about their writing presented our biggest headache
in arranging the room as a (writers) workshop. (p.64).
Getting started
was sometimes problematic for the girls. Deanne said, "Sometimes
it's hard, sometimes I'll just sit there for hours and hours and,
like, think till I get like two or three lines and then I can just
keep going." She preferred to write poetry and was very focused
on the conciseness of language. She felt the first few lines had
to be right or she couldn't continue. If she had too much trouble
starting a piece, she said she just picked another topic and tried
again.
The writing
process was unique for each girl but most were aware of the basic
steps and strategies. Some followed the steps more religiously than
others. Some believed that prewriting was a good way to get their
ideas down, and most saw the value in revision. Writers like Cindi,
Shannon and Tanis seemed to pay less attention to the details of
the writing process and more attention to getting their ideas across
in an interesting and exciting way. Shannon said, "You want
it to be interesting and make sense that is different from any other
story they have read." Writers like Dori and Janice, conversely,
focused more on the steps of drafting, revising and editing. Dori
commented, "Yeah, I'll revise it once or twice, I'll just kind
of go through it for spelling mistakes, or what sounds better paragraphing
maybe." As a poet, Deanne took a great deal of time with her
first draft, did little prewriting, and always did a second draft
that generally didn't contain major revisions at that point in the
process. In writing prose, however, she put ideas down on scrap
paper, thought out episodes and events in advance of starting to
write, and made more major revisions.
The girls used
a variety of stimuli if they found they were running out of ideas.
They stopped and reflected on what the writing was about, reread
something they had read, asked a friend for ideas, or just put the
piece aside fora while, sometimes for up to several days. Cindi
explained that she sometimes had the opposite problem of too many
ideas all at once, leading her to lose her train of thought. Cindi
described this problem as, "like getting too many ideas at
once. I don't --that bothers me, 'cause I get confused," so
she "wrote down, like, brief little pointers about what was
going to happen." This was the strategy she used to keep track
of her ideas during writing. On the other hand, Tanis said, "Like,
I have lots of ideas, but I never get them down on paper. Like,
I just kinda keep them in a file in my head."
Writing the
ending to a story was sometimes an issue. Tanis suggested, "I
think about an ending and if I don't like it, I'll just keep on
thinking of different ones and see which would match the story better."
When the teachers
expected lengthy pieces of writing, the girls attacked the task
in a number of ways. Some wrote during class time; some wrote at
home. A few girls wrote, shared the draft with friends or the teachers,
and then rewrote. Others wrote the piece in one sitting and handed
in their first or second draft without anyone else reading it. In
these classrooms, it was not uncommon to see a student working on
the same piece of writing over a ten-day or two-week period. Shannon,
for example, worked on "The Life of Young Girl: Part One"
in five class periods from April 24 to May 10 without ever taking
her work home. This 700 word introductory excerpt from a longer
piece demonstrated her focused approach to writing. Others, like
Cindi, wrote at home every day for about ten days in order to complete
a prologue to her mystery story, "See of Revenge." This
1,300 word introduction was very clearly crafted to hook the reader.
We realized
through the experiences with these girls how important it was to
set sufficient time aside in class for them to both compose and
revise. We also realized that this time needed to be both daily
and ongoing. Good serious writing takes time to complete, as Sarah
Freedman (1994) also found with the Writing Exchange Project sponsored
by the National Center for the Study of Writing. The project showed
that "students who achieved the most were in classes where
the teacher expected them to produce lengthy academic pieces and
where they were given several months to craft each one" (Freedman,
Flower, Hall and Hayes 1994). Donald Graves (1992) recommends "allocating
at least three hours or class periods a week in order for this habit
of mind to take hold."
Writing Topics
The girls got
their ideas to write from a variety of sources. In a manner similar
to Donald Graves' (1974) notion of "grazing", they drew
on a wide range of resources. Sometimes they grazed close to home,
looking around the classroom and at books they had read. Sometimes
they went further afield, using ideas that they had read in the
newspaper, cartoons, or popular magazines. Movies and television
shows were also prominent resources. One girl said she used her
daydreams to spark her writing. Although they said that they didn't
use the substance of their own lives as the basis for writing because
"it's too boring", they admitted that they did use the
lives of their friends. Karen said, "one of my friends will
tell me about their problems and their secrets that you can't tell
anyone so I guess they just come out in my writing.....most of my
friends are really sad and they talk a great deal of about suicide
and they are having really tough lives and so I just mention that.....I
promise not to tell anyone so I just write it down."
Macey's (1992)
work with primary children supports the work of Bird (1992) and
Graves (1974) in suggesting that boys and girls pick different kinds
of topics to write about. Madey found young English boys wrote more
about action and adventure and the girls wrote more about family
or domestic themes. The girls' writing contained many more references
to feelings and was more often written in the third person, whereas
the boys wrote in the first person.
Donald Graves
(1974) in his early work with young children specified territorial
realms for male and female writers. He found girls wrote more frequently
about topics in the primary territory, closer to home and school,
whereas boys chose topics of a more secondary territorial nature.
The girls in his study did not frequently write about topics like
crime and current affairs. Our study did not confirm this tendency
in writing. We found that the grade eight girls wrote about topics
from both primary and secondary territories.
During free
writing and creative writing times, the teachers gave the students
complete choice of topic and genre. The girls wrote about a wide
variety of topics but used a limited number of genres. In expository
writing, they wrote about trauma, abandonment, teen pregnancy, divorce,
suicide, intimidation, shoplifting, drugs, interracial dating, sexual
abuse, sexual harassment, dreams, friends and relationships. Their
poetry covered topics like romance, loss, dreams, friendship, relationships,
animal life and philosophy. Their fictional and narrative writing
included crime, mystery, murder, adventure and horror stories. They
also wrote teen fiction, focusing on boyfriends and relationships.
Many of the topics that the girls chose were, although completely
their own choice, a reflection of the themes under study in these
classrooms.
The girls believed
that their writing represented them uniquely. Although most said
that the didn't consciously try to put themselves into their stories,
many commented that indirectly, their world and personality had
come through in the words. Some said that they used the names of
friends, relatives or acquaintances for their characters and that
some characters were composites of people they knew, i.e., "kind
of based on my friends." Tanis, on the other hand, wrote herself
into her horror story, "The Night of Torture", in which
she played one of the main characters and used the names of five
friends for other characters. She also used places or buildings
she knew. "I use place, 'cause like, where I used to live there
used to be, like, really old big houses, so I'd use them in my stories
for haunted houses." Jerline believed that the way she expressed
her feelings was very distinct and showed in her writing. Jamie,
a very quiet girl, said that she had pictures in her head that she
used in her writing. Denne, a Central American girl who had witnessed
a shooting death in her homeland said, " I just have a picture
in my head and when I'm writing about hate or violence, or something
like that, I use that picture."
Several of the
girls saw themselves as emerging writers who were constructing ideas
through their writing. Others saw themselves as merely doing what
they were told. Helen expressed the former belief very clearly when
she said, "I think of writing, like, when you're writing, you
express feelings, and yourself and brings more ideas to your head."
Deanne wrote poetry both in and out of class and often gave her
poems to friends or family as gifts. She didn't keep copies for
herself, explaining that she "could just write them over again."
Having constructed them in the first place, she believed that she
could reconstruct them is she wanted, whenever she wanted to.
Audience
The writer's
workshop and attention to the writing process were an important
part of both classrooms. The teachers encouraged and expected the
students to write both in class and at home. They expected them
to find topics that were of interest and encouraged them to take
risks as writers. The teachers outlined the basics of the writing
process and expected final copy of pieces of writing to be put into
the writing files. The teachers responded to their students during
the writing process, listening to the writers' dilemmas and offering
questions and suggestions. They moved around the class and interacted
as needed.
Response to
their work played an important role for these writers. Most were
comfortable with their girls friends as an audience and valued their
friends' responses. Similarly, Barnes (1994) found that young children
write for readers of their own sex. The girls also were very conscious
of the teachers as their audience, however, and valued their teachers'
feedback. The girls believed that some individuals were a better
audience for a writer than others. Among teachers, for example,
some were more active as an audience than others and really read
and thought about the student's work. Some girls noted that they
had had teachers in the past who just skimmed their writing and
did not engage in it in a way the was particularly meaningful or
helpful to them as writers. They thought there were times this happened
out of kindness and other times when it was due to a lack of interest
on the teachers part. Similar comments were made about family members
and friends who read their work. Dori said, "I think that even
if it was bad they probably wouldn't say it sucked."
Most girls in
these classrooms were extremely cautious about having their work
read to the entire class. They made it very clear that they were
not comfortable with the boys as their audience. They did not want
the boys reading their work, and when asked to write something,
they often asked, "do I have to read it out loud?" If
on a voluntary basis they could select items from their writing
file to be read out loud, some girls were prepared to let the teacher
read their work, but they wouldn't do it themselves.
On one occasion
during "Author's Chair", the classroom atmosphere varied
from roars of laughter to solemness and quiet. However, following
the reading of Tanis' "Sea of Revenge", one boy loudly
stated, "I read that in a book." Tanis, visibly upset,
denied that was so, and sat quietly at her desk for the rest of
the period. The next time there was an "Author's Chair"
in the classroom, Tanis would not have her work read.
The students
in these two classrooms were not the kind of audience with which
many of the girls were comfortable. Considering the relationship
between the genders in these rooms, this was understandable. The
girls did not feel comfortable with the way the boys talked about
them. To put themselves in the public eye by reading their work
was like setting themselves up for ridicule, perhaps not immediately
and overtly, but still introducing a risk of ridicule that many
of the girls did not want to take.
Variation
Among Writers
There were several
girls in each class who wrote lengthy, imaginative stories and frequently
added to their writing files. They wrote long stories, had ample
ideas, trusted their own writing decisions and reflected on their
own work. They liked to write and admired other writers. Cindi suggested
that a good imagination was essential to being a good writer, as
was "someone who had had a lot of experiences and has lived
a very different exciting life. I think they could, like, write
very differently, very good." She also believed that it was
important for a good writer to have the ability to say to herself,
"I am not going to quit. I am going to sit down and write this
no matter how long it takes. I've got to write this."
There were also
several girls who seldom added to their writing files. Although
they wrote, they didn't view themselves as writers. Janelle, for
example, was extemely quiet in class. Outside class she loved to
write letters and wrote daily in a diary. Viewed by her teachers
as a non-reader, she had been tested by the school and identified
as having special needs. She was in a pull-out program to supplement
her classroom activities. She wrote two poems in class in early
May, one called "Questions" and another called "Who's
Holding Sheena Now?" She hesitated to let any of her classmates
read them or to put them in her writing file. She was very tentative
about her own writing and didn't believe in her own authority. She
explained, "I just think they might be dumb and that they won't
like them or something." As she was one of the girls in the
classroom who was picked on the most, it stands to reason that she
would mistrust this audience. If her classmates didn't value her,
she didn't believe they would value her thoughts. The poem, "Questions",
shoed how Janelle was trying to make sense of her world and to communicate
this effort. In her poem, "Who's Holding Sheena Now?",
she was trying to make a statement about her friend Sheena.
There were other
girls as well who didn't put their work in their writing files.
The Aboriginal girls in these classrooms, for example, handed in
far fewer pieces of writing than their non-Aboriginal classmates.
Helen, a most articulate and literate youth, kept her work very
private and shared only the minimum amount required. Jamie never
handed in anything until the last month of school when she started
to find her voice. Her empty writing file was matched by her silence
in class.
Sarah Freedman
(1994), a researcher at the National Center for Research on Writing,
suggests that in a multicultural context, classroom teachers and
their students are expected to exchange cultural understandings,
but that much of the responsibility lies with the minority student
to learn the majority culture. Freedman believes it is a tough order
to expect minority students "to negotiate the maze of American
culture and its multiple discourse communities each with their own
conventions , roles, and appropriate languages", and that writing
provides a way to find a window on these intercultural realities.
She believes that writing can help "students take part in inter
cultural collaboration by making different ways of talking, thinking
and being explicit" (p.15).
This process
was not in obvious operation with the Aboriginal girls in either
Room A or B. They did not use their writing to explore or explain
their worlds. It seemed as though they chose to explore popular
teen culture rather than their Aboriginal world. This lack of reference
to an Aboriginal experience paralleled the absence of talk in Aboriginal
languages in the classroom and the school. These aspects of Aboriginality
seemed to have no place here.
Free writing
and creative writing times in these classrooms were positive experiences
for the girls, and the teachers found a great deal of growth in
the girls' writing over the year. Caywood and Overing (1987) believe
that the writing classroom "has the potential to be the single,
most important learning experience for students if it provides them
with confidence in their own ideas and belief in their own authority"
(p.xv). This may be particularly important for girls at this stage
of early adolescence as they try to understand the conflicts and
discrepancies in their lives.
Conflict
in the Classroom
The experiences
of the girls in these classrooms was different than that of the
boys. Being a teenager was not gender neutral of gender equal. As
boys and girls interacted in these middle years classroom, they
brought with them previous experiences with gender socialization,
and their daily interactions over the school year contributed to
the construction of who they were. This process was not without
tensions and conflict.
The extent of
conflict between boys and girls was disclosed when an adult witness
saw five grade eight boys surround and hit one of the girls. The
girl pleaded with the perpetrators of the violence to stop. They
didn't stop until they realized that an adult was present. This
incident provided the teacher with an opportunity to inquire, with
both the boys and girls, into the nature of the verbal and physical
abuse in the classroom and the school and to discuss ways to address
it. The girls complained that they were being harassed in the classroom,
school corridors and on the playground. They felt bullied and intimidated,
and although they wanted it to end, they were worried about losing
their friendships with male classmates. These two realities created
conflict for the girls.
The separate
discussions with the boys and girls revealed a great deal about
the relations of power in the classroom. The teacher believed that
these conflicts had been affecting the overall classroom dynamics
and classroom learning. It had, she believed, reached a point where
it affected her interaction with the students as well. She, too,
felt bullied and threatened by some of the boys.
The emergence
of this kind of conflict may not seem obviously related to the girls'
written discourse but it certainly affected classroom talk. As the
conflict became more and more evident, we believe it greatly affected
other aspects of the "grade eight experience" for these
girls. It was part of a classroom atmosphere of intimidation, one
where some of the girls were not comfortable enough to either speak
of share their work.
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5.
Implications for Teaching and Learning
The girls in
the study constructed their gender identity in these classrooms
through their interaction, talk and written text. Their discourse
was shaped by the larger social order as well as their immediate
environment. Talk played a very important role for them, with private
"girl talk" functioning to build relationships and support
networks of learners and friends. They relied to a great extent
on private talk, but when given an environment that was non-threatening
and an opportunity to use talk in creative ways, they tried out
more public talk. On the basis of their overall experiences, we
encourage classroom teachers to find ways to support talk for girls
and to find ways of ensuring that they, too, have ample opportunity
to explore both public and private talk in large and small groupings.
A great deal
of writing went on in these classrooms that was not curricular,
and some of it, like the "notes", went underground. "Notes"
were an interesting example of text that was not only socially constructed,
but differentially valued. "Noted" carried with them a
particular social context and were primarily written by girls. As
teachers, we need to think about the role that instances of substitutional
literacy (Taylor 1993) like this plays for girls in our classrooms
and what value it could have. Perhaps we need to look for ways to
support all kinds of writing in our classrooms and take care not
to privilege some while discarding others. Teachers could recognize
note writing as a valid form of classroom communication, let the
girls write, and set up mail boxes to facilitate the exchange.
The limited
range of genres used by the girls brought forth numerous questions
as to what this means and what could be done to expand the range.
A look at using more genres in the classroom is necessary if we
are going to support girls' literacy development. We need to find
ways to open the doors to all genres, give choices to our students
and welcome such alternatives as letters, diaries, autobiographies
and dialogue journals.
It became very
obvious throughout this research that the composition process was
very time consuming and required an atmosphere of freedom, encouragement,
collaboration, and concentration. Creating this combination of elements
within a classroom was essential but challenging for these adolescent
girls. One of the implications here is the importance of creating
a literate climate in middle years classrooms. If we are going to
have serious, high quality writing from students, there needs to
be considerable and concentrated time for writing in classrooms
on a regular basis. Teachers play the key role in ensuring that
this takes place.
It is also important
that we recognize how large a role literature plays for writers,
and this is something that really needs to be explored further in
terms of girls as writers. Meredith Cherland's (1994) work with
girls reading fiction and constructing identity gives great insight
into the role of literature in the lives of adolescent girls and
offers ideas for consideration. We found that when the girls wrote,
they relied heavily on fiction they had read. The two experience
of reading and writing were closely related. It is, therefore, helpful
for teachers to have an in-depth understanding of the literature
adolescent girls read and like.
The importance
of teachers being an "active audience", providing continual
feedback throughout the writing process, emerged clearly from the
study. Giving real and non-threatening responses to the girls' writing
proved to be extremely important. Because of the relationships between
girls and boys in school today, this may not be a simple or easy
task. However, it is essential that middle years teachers think
carefully about how to demonstrate and build a truly supportive
caring relationship between the adolescent girls and boys in their
classrooms. If this sort of relationship does not seem to exist,
they should not hesitate to look for alternative arrangements in
terms of providing an audience for girls' writing. Perhaps we need
to follow the girls' lead in and formalize what they do already
in these classes, i.e., read each other's stories without sharing
them with the boys. Perhaps we need to think about ways to separate
the audiences by gender. Two separate "Author's Circles"
in a classroom might be a reasonable solution.
As teachers,
we need to surface issues of gender and ethnicity in our classrooms
and talk with our students about these issues. We need to find ways
to let our students know that their life experiences, although they
may not be mainstream, are valuable, providing a rich resource that
they can draw on as writers. We also need to find ways to validate
and value who our female students are as girls, validating and valuing
how their writing represents them.
There are also
a number of administrative issues that emerge from our study. Administrators
need to look for ways to provide equitable learning opportunities
for girls. Such opportunities may include equity workshops, discussions
of violence and harassment, and perhaps even splitting some classes
by gender. We found that in the Physical Education classes, it was
common for many girls not to participate. This leads us to ask where
else in the school program they are not participating. Perhaps we
need to look at other classes, find out where girls are not involved,
and then look at alternative groupings. There are numerous programs
for girls in Mathematics and Science in middle and high schools
in other cities and countries that could be used as models.
Classroom composition
and gender balance was very important in the classrooms in the study.
Teachers and administrators need to be aware of the effect these
factors can have on girls as they select students for classrooms.
Staffing of middle years classrooms is also very important in its
implications for the learning of girls. Administrators may need
to look at finding more women teachers for middle years and assisting
them in addressing the issues of equity, harassment, and violence
that permeate classrooms at this level. It is important for girls
at this age to have women teachers with whom they can identify.
Since the middle
years are a very crucial time for adolescents, good programs that
address gender issues will not only benefit the girls in the classrooms;
they will also benefit the boys. Boys need to understand the experiences
of the other sex and to come to an understanding of the issues in
the lives of their mothers, sisters, female friends, lovers, and
future spouses and mothers of their children. We believe that in
this day and age, schools are doing boys no service by perpetuating
the practice of privileging one sex, and we need to search for ways
to help all young adults to understand the inequities.
As yet, no theory
of adolescent discourse forgers provides a complete explanation
of how their gender is constructed, maintained and expressed. As
women educators and researchers, the authors hope to contribute
to the field a clearer picture from this study and do some of what
bell hook (1992) suggests:
Our search
leads us back to where it all began, to that moment when a woman
or child, who may have thought she was all alone, began to formulate
theory from experience. I am grateful that I can be a witness,
testifying that we can create a feminist theory, a feminist practice,
a revolutionary feminist movement, that can speak directly to
the pain within folks, and offer them healing words, healing strategies,
healing theory. There is no one among us who has not felt the
pain of sexist oppression, the anguish male domination can create.
If we create theory that addresses this pain, there will be no
gap between feminist theory and feminist practice (p.83).
6.
Recommendations
Classroom
Recommendations
- Talk (both
private and public) must be supported for girls in middle years
classrooms.
- Teachers
need to be aware of boys' discourse and ensure that it doesn't
dominate the classroom.
- Teachers
must listen to adolescent girls and understand their world, finding
ways to encourage dialogue with them around multiculturalism and
diversity.
- Note writing
and other such writing private genres could be recognized as a
valid means of communication.
- Genres that
value and represent the literacy of girls and women need to be
included in our classrooms and curriculum.
- Girls need
the freedom to choose writing topics and genres and to have authentic
reasons to write.
- Time must
be set aside in middle years classrooms for extended writing.
- Girls must
be encouraged to collaborate in writing and share their writing
with others, but first a supportive environment and non-intimidating
response practices need to be in place.
- Teachers
must ensure that the girls in their classrooms find real and non-threatening
audiences.
- Options such
as "Author's Chair" separated by gender might be considered.
- Teachers
must look carefully at the role of literature and students' response
to literature in classrooms. We must encourage a wide diversity
of genres and authors in terms of culture and gender.
- Teachers
must work toward building supportive, caring relationships between
adolescent boys and girls in their classrooms.
- The rights
of women and minorities are fundamental human rights that classroom
teachers must take steps to protect in middle years.
- Classroom
teachers must provide middle years youth with the opportunity
to discuss philosophical, moral and ethical issues through both
oral and written discourse.
- Teachers
need to recognize the importance of being open and honest in their
relationships with adolescent students. Adolescents will only
be open and honest in classrooms if their teachers are. Lack of
openness has serious implications for what students are willing
to say and to write.
Administrative
Recommendations
- School administrators
must examine the issue of equity in schools and ensure that girls
have equal opportunity to learn. Options for ensuring this might
include some single sex subject-teaching in the middle years,
women's mentoring partnership programs, and workshops on issues
like sexual harassment.
- Principals
must provide the leadership to ensure that boys don't overpower
girls in middle year classrooms. This danger needs to be considered
from the moment that students are selected for each room until
the end of each year.
- More women
teachers should be hired for middle years classrooms. At this
very critical time of change for young women, it is essential
that they have woman as role models and teachers who understand
and can help them deal with issues of gender.
- School administrators
must recognize inequities and harassment within schools, actively
challenging and trying to change unfair conditions for girls.
They must develop appropriate policies as well as positive school
and classroom plans to address these important issues.
- Administrators
need to support teachers who are addressing inequities in their
classrooms. Controversial topics in young adolescents' lives need
to be opened to discussion. These youth need opportunities to
read and write about such topics if they are to understand and
take action for dealing with them.
- Administrators
must encourage and support middle years teachers in their efforts
to bring girls to the forefront of school achievements, highlighting
their literacy developments.
- School boards
need to continue to seek out and place women in administrative
positions.
- More support
for middle years teachers as they deal with these very complicated
classrooms is imperative. Such support could perhaps be provided
by middle years consultants who assist teachers in finding gender
equitable resources and pedagogies that encourage girls' discourse
in the classroom.
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